Evaluation for presentation

I think my research contributed a lot in my presentation because if I didn't have all of that research I would have had nothing to back my question up with. If I had no research on about of the films, Hangover and the Bridesmaid then I wouldn't be able to back up my question which was why are male characters represented very immaturely in comedy films. I think the research is the main aspect and it shows if you have any knowledge of what you are talking about. If I had no research then I wouldn't have had anything to talk about when I am giving my presentation. So everything which backed my presentation up was the research i had done in advance.

The delivery of my presentation was not the best as it could of been because I think i could of tried harder to deliver a amazing presentation. I think I didn't have much information to cover all of the 15 seconds of talking which had to be done. So i was running of things to say as i was waiting for the slides to change, i think i should of have information which covers at the 13 sec of each slide, even if i was silent for 2 sec there wouldn't have been a problem. I did not have much information on the slides in a way it is a good thing and a bad thing, good because in an ignite talk presentation you cannot have loads and loads of information on the slide, bad because there has to be information which has to cover all the time for the slide so in this case at-least 15 seconds of information. Another thing which i could of done was avoid reading from the board. It was that bad it was all 20 slides which was told to make.

I think that the topic i have chosen is a good topic overall, so its male representation in comedy films. The question is that Why are men in comedy films represented very immaturely? The reason why i chose this area of topic was because i felt that i would feel much comfortable with it. I think i have loads of talk about in this topic and i would hopefully get a really good grade for it. The topic is simply looking at the male representation in comedy films. i think i have loads of text available for me out there. I could use loads of examples from films and other texts from the internet.

I think i can develop this into an essay, as i already have the main point which is male representation. There are loads of things which i could talk about, how men are represented, why are they represented like that, is it done to build upon the narrative. That's why i think this topic is a good topic is just needs loads of research so back it up. There could be loads of issues raised in this essay about male representation and why they are represented in that why.